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Sunny Joy

Sun flickers through leaves
Below with dear ones in shade
Kissed by a cool breeze
Joy blows through my sunny mind
bliss lifts me above all cares

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This is a poem about one of my happiest memories

What do you think,gently speak your mind .

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 28
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    I feel so loved and happy reading this poem.
    I just loved this poem beautiful!!

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Tqop
    October 18
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    I really enjoyed the title. It made me smile. And I really enjoyed the third line. Again, it made me smile and forget my worries.

  • sleepinglion
    September 27
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    So well captured, that precious moment


  • Denerica
    September 24

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    Beautiful...cloudy here, but can feel all the sensations of this day you describe, full of peace and wonderment. Excellent. Blessings.