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You Don't Care

Pain is good
Good is death
And death is food
Let me go and let me cry
You don’t care
Let me die

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 4

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    Wow this was short and well written. I enjoyed reading it...I am sure that some people have been there and no how hard it is. Though I must say that this was very good. Keep up te good work!