Pain is good
Good is death
And death is food
Let me go and let me cry
You don’t care
Let me die
A contest entry
- six lines. by sighingflosser..
700 points, ended September 28, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ideas for improvement?
Comments
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Wow this was short and well written. I enjoyed reading it...I am sure that some people have been there and no how hard it is. Though I must say that this was very good. Keep up te good work!

