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Things Would Change

Buying that pair of shoelaces I've always wanted,
would be a dream come true.
Being able to buy my little brother
as many tickets as he wants
to ride the carousel horse,
would make my heart feel better.
A new car for dad.  Mom can stop working,
and school us at home because she's really smart.
Fix the hole in the roof, rain keeps soaking the bed,
my brother swears he didn't do it.
I'd get a new swing set in the yard,
the one with the tunnels to crawl thru.
And a big diamond ring for mommy,
because daddy could never afford one.

Oh if I could only win the lottery,
it would change the world for my family,
friends, and all the people it could help.
Because I know what it's like to live without.
I wouldn't be able to save the world,
no one has made enough money yet.

But, for now I'll just keep my faith in God strong.





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  • Recluse Writer gold member
    September 25

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    is all I have for now...it is free unlike the rest of things in life
    Oh for the simple things in life
    Linda
    But, for now I'll just keep my faith in God strong.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 24

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    very precious
    I do love the way you have this
    so full of innocence with a golden heart
    a pleasure
    God bless you my friend...


    • Three Doves
      September 24
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      I love it when the Holy Spirit comes out to play. It really does release the child inside.


  • Random Renee
    September 24

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    very well written thank you, I can tell you want to do these things... this is what i mean and you did very well thank you! good luck and thanks for sharing!! I know times are hard for alot of ppl and for me included..as long as we have eachother it doesnt matter..but how nice it would be to be able to plan these plans made when winning the lottery! how wonderful it'd be if we could for real make our lives much more managable! ♥ thank you well done again!
    Née ☼