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Secrets

Secrets hide
Away from the
World, revealed only to
A few at a time.

Those who are trusted are invited
Into confidence. That trust is hard to
Earn. Everything in this world is hard to
Earn. Wouldn't it be nice for something to be.
Easy, simple, free from strings. But I am being idealistic.

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Exactly 54 words, unless you count the title, then 55. Can you find the pattern?

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  • Rejected Easter Egg
    September 24

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    If it was all easy no one would have appreciation, and without appreciation there would be no gratitude, without gratitude there wouldn't be love.