~forever~
beating hearts
quenched thirst
lovers knowing lust
given freely and willingly
imitating animals wild and free
touching, rubbing bodies in unison
sheets soaked with passion and desire
~satisfied~
desire and passion with soaked sheets
unison in bodies rubbing, touching
free and wild animals imitating
willingly and freely given
lust knowing lovers
thirst quenched
hearts beating
~forever~
Author notes
Palindrome Poetry
Also Known as Mirrored Poetry
A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward. It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running back again...
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- Poetry Formed LII - by Bear by Arkbear.
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stunning
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I've never written a mirrored form. A very difficult and rewarding challenge. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent work and best of luck to you in my contest.-
-Steve -
very impressive form, and nice diction.
Best of luck in the contest.
Abby -
Really beautiful and learned something new.
Wow that really got me pumped up your poem did. It is a very beautiful writing. Your poem made my heart race for a moment. I really enjoyed reading this beautiful writing. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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A perfect Palindrone - Flow is easy.....message is tasteful and lovely......aesthetics are off in 2nd L......your 3rd L needs work -
quinched....comma....thirsting
thirstings....comma....quinched
I have nothing else here to critique....I am very pleased with this Entry......but in the next Palindrone Contest....I am going to challenge you to wrap your thoughts around each L, and not use each L as its' own source of info.....I hope that makes sense.....good luck!
Bear -
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passion
I've learned something new. Thank you. Palindrome is a new word for me. I think you did a fine job of mirror imaging.
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this was great, sis! beautiful write.
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Mirror of lust so beautifully written and set
I love this and you are really talented sis
Much love and good luck always
Julie
your pet spider x
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Wow.. Amazing write and flow.
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