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Please help me for I have lost myself
I fell for your disguise and wondered off into hell
I thought I was sent an angel when you came into view
Alone in my bed simply thinking of you
Every time we kissed I could taste your fuckin lies
Which you told so well as you looked me in the eyes
Never in my life have I felt so dumb
Desensitized by your love I am now completely numb.

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 4

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    This was good. I enjoyed reading it. I especially like the lines:

    I fell for your disguise and wondered off into hell
    I thought I was sent an angel when you came into view
    Alone in my bed simply thinking of you
    Every time we kissed I could taste your fuckin lies

    Keep up the good work!