love is what i find in you
love is what i want all through life
you are supposed to be the one im with forever
butyo u seem to keep distancing urself as if you dont want me
love is the feeling that i have in you
the longing i wait for when i see you
you say i love you but how do i know you really mean it
i want to believe everything you tell me but ive been hurt before
i hope you show me the way into your heart and tell me to stay.
I HOPE YOU LEAVE HER AND IM NOT JUST A FOOL FOR LOVING YOU!!!!
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heyy.. this is good, but i've found a few errors haha you know i love you sis
you should change "u" to "you" and "ur" to "your" it would look better...
i really found the emotion in this so raw and talented.. i mean you say how you love him but you are not wanting to lose him...
this is good great penning
Ciara "
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thanks sis its a great poem i was happy with it when i finished it. i know your trying to help and i will fix it. -
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okay lol
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this poem is filled with emotion, both good as in love, and sad as in denial, but i must applaud
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thanks
thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated
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