your the stripes to my rainbow and you don't even try
to have a life with you, i would never lie
and even though we are looked down upon
and even though they don't care
they will walk away with envious faces
and know that we are rare
a love like ours cant be kept legally
in the false papers that bring our love together but
our love with come together with your fingers laced in mine
we may not be as straight as a line
but you are my one and only
and even though we may always have to hide it
and try to keep away from the fear
there is nothing stronger than us
so kiss me, my dear
I'll hold you tight and we'll show everyone
that rainbows are beautiful
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First off, I love the picture.
You did a good job with the rhyming, though a little inconsistent.
I really liked how you started with "your the stripes to my rainbow and you don't even try" then tied it together in the end with "I'll hold you tight and we'll show everyone that rainbows are beautiful"
I liked it but I feel like its missing something.
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