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field; morning

gentle sunlit warmth
caresses field of arrayed
yellow buttercups
awakened by soft, whispered
breathing of bumblebee wings

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 3
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    beatiful i like the breath of bumble bee wings thank you for sharing


  • Tqop
    September 28
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    Beautiful. Well done.


  • mgmc gold member
    September 26
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    Very nice!!


  • crivanea silver member
    September 24
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    hmmmmmm..breathlessly beautiful


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 24
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    oooo... I saw the prompt. And then i read your poem again. Wow baby..wow!

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