Consider me a victim
Of my Own soul
Hollow now
Once I was Whole
Breaking down
Is taking it's Toll
I won't be a victim
That I Refuse
So here's my promise
I have one Last muse
I am changing forever
No Feelings
No Heart
No Soul
Because it has killed me before
So I'm Killing it Now
Author notes
Written on a whim... just came out of nowhere
A contest entry
- Prewrite contest by Blue-Rose Beauty.
600 points, ended November 10, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your first impression?
Comments
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Hollow now
Once I was Whole
I really liked those lines.
The rest seemed a little cliche, but I liked the basic meaning.
Nice write, thanks for entering
- Blue
beaut
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Wow
I really like the deep meaining in this . Also the rhyming was really good and helped the poem to flow.
Great write!
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