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Bleaching Light



Every passing thought
breaths in vicious air
through the cracks fomitable walls
went to war to fight off,
walls built in haste,
a feeble attempt
to self-medicate.
With each feeble attempt to comprehend,
brain cells rip open,
releasing dreams -
let them go!

Verily that same crack is the exit,
that same crack leads to grand things!
Breach that same crack
to let dreams go,
to search for yourself.

Chase hard into that bleaking night
Reach that bleaching light

















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  • Rowan gold member
    September 27
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    Thoughtful write, thanks so much for following the rules and entering.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 24
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    I love what you did with the prompt. Captivating emotions. best of luck in the contest.
    write on.
    ~*~SP~*~