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if i should have killed him???

Longing desires and urges flowed through my body yet i still cant believe i did it
the covers were drenched with his blood and my clothes had dissappeared during
as i stand waiting for the end
i contemplate what it was that i just did
how i was capable i am uncertain
what provoke me
i remember it was her
but the truth will never be known now he denied it till the very end
now i'll never know if i should have killed him

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    September 24

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    I am not sure if you should have or not. But.. I would help you get rid of the body. lol


    • Nephalaneous lover
      September 24
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      your a sweet heart lol i wrote this originnally for a contest but felt it didnt quite fit the pic i wanted to use so i switched it last minute lol, my next poem is the one with the pic that inspired me to write this poem lol funny how that works heh