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Over a cup of tea..

Over a cup of tea we met
Dancing around the fire we saw
Through a dark gloomy forest we knew
Walking along the shoreline we spoke
Looking up at the sky we felt
Through the invisible glass we heard
When our lips met we tasted
Watching the sunset we were amazed
As the moon rose we smiled
At sunrise we knew we were in love
Over a cup of tea you asked..
Will
you
marry
me?
With a tear down my cheek I answered..
Of course
I
love
you

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 24, 2009

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    How beautiful! I love how you used all the senses to bring the memory alive and allowthe reader to share that time with you. Lovely imagery indeed.
    Thank you so much for your entry
    gaylene