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Falling...

My heart beats faster
as our eyes connect
your hand finds mine
nothing to object

My obvious affection
creates a sly checky grin
afraid of rejection
my blood rushes again

with blushed cheeks
and tender embraces
we cant even see
the criticizing faces

A passion so ardent
a bind so tight
our presence doesnt hinder
the fast approaching night...

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