Sweet nectar
the forbidden fruit
hidden your gentle firmness
pressed my skin
kindling to rise
of passions blindness
driving one's urges
now coursing deep
hearken to bodies call
of inner desires
for taste juices within
each morsel
shall I devour
in slow willful
quest thy sustenance
till consumed shall
hunger your fruit
be quenched
Author notes
picture by - mirabilia
A contest entry
- graze on my lips by girl-interrupted by Girl-Interrupted.
999 points, ended October 9, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
I agree it is very sensual
But just that perfect touch.........you have penned.........
Best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you ever so much for your time in reading and commenting.
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beautifully written, very sensual...
thanks for entering the contest and best of luck!
love,
becca -
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It is I that thanks you for the reading and commenting and the chance to escape into the meager words of an old ones dream......
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