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Gone,

You're wearing me down
I've fallen so far
The words we never said
They tore us apart

I'm loosing my head
and I'm out of my mind
The last end of this cigarette
won't calm my nerves tonight

And my breath
is labored now
While my chest
rips from the inside out

And I can't sleep
Its been days now
I feel weak
in this life I've found

Can you speak to me
one last worthless lie
So can I shut my eyes
and destroy the dreams inside

Not finished, maybe.

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