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Katerina

Such an inquisitive little bird, my Katerina...
Always on a different topic, jumping ahead,
Never waiting for the rest of us to
Catch up with her train of thought.
She never seemed to have the time…

Bright-eyed wonder filled her days…
The questions she asked that had
Barely crossed her lips before she asked
Another one, always wanting answers.
She paused only a moment for them, though…

Blonde hair so soft beneath my hand…
When she finally fell asleep each night,
Still pleading for me to read yet another story,
I wondered why she was always in such a hurry.
Perhaps she knew how little time she had…

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A name was given in the contest, and I had to personify it. I hope that this makes her seem as alive as she appeared in my mind.

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  • writeonhorses
    September 30
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    katerina, the little bird...it really works. i can picture her like that. beautiful write, the end especially. nice!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 30

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    Ohh.. that ending certainly made me wonder about what might have been the future for her! I like her inquisitive nature

    Thanks for the entry.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 23
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    Your name is - Katerina