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Abounding confusion

I am living a life
you don't know I have
    making effort to stray from the past
when anxiously wrought
memories from afar
  make it hard to hide tears that last

I can't stop spinning in circles
  while you're living your life by your rules
I am waiting for miracles
  straight from the books
      and refusing to start life anew

I refuse to concede
  to the rules of the game
reaching out for the things you have touched
I can almost imagine
  your face as you told me
that I have expected too much

I can't stop spinning in circles
  while you're living your life by your rules
please forgive me for thinking
  our love can survive
      yet hiding my feelings from you



Author notes

Inspired by Iris by Goo Goo Dolls

I did my best to stray from rhyming, but after listening to the memory-laden song a few times, I couldn't stray from the melody. This is the first rhyming poem I'd written in ages.

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