I wonder why you had to leave
while i sit here and grieve.
I hold onto the memories that we had
some good and some bad.
When I hold onto you guitar
It makes me feel like you not that far.
Some days are good some days are bad
but most the time they are just really sad.
I know i will see you again
but until then
I will always wonder why you had to leave
while i sit here and grieve.
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I have been trying to write something since my aunt passed away 8 months ago. This just hit me today. it may not be one of my best ones but it is what was on my heart at the time of writing this.
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Ah honey, I am sorry
This was very good. I am sorry for your loss. I do see some areas that need minor work and it's right here: "When I hold onto you guitar
It makes me feel like you not that far."
It should read, "When I hold onto your guitar
It makes me feel like you're not that far."
But that is all I see that needs fixing.
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