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His Smile

A beautiful smile
Suddenly the whole world
Is gone
Lost
Irrelevant to life, to meaning
Nothing else matters
Only him, my love, my life
Does he know?
Does he know he is my all,
My everything?
That I suffer, agonized,
In pain
When I'm not with him?
I cannot breathe
Cannot live
Until he smiles at me
Says my name
That smile
Means everything to me

Do I matter this way
Do I matter at all
To him?

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  • John Faulkner gold member
    September 24

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    Beautifull love poem..I can feel your emotion in this one.Gorgeous word use to describe your thoughts.I can also sense pain and indecision..Great job

    John