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Dreaming of You

I dream of kissing your soft pretty lips,
While lying in your arms ,holding me tight.
The sweet sucking, and rubbing aganist my hips
With your two gorgeous eyes locked in my sight.

I've fallen for your good looks and charm
I dream of sleeping inside your bed covers
While your body keeps me warm, inside your arms.
When I moan with you,we'll become lovers.

I am wishing, I was there beside you.
My body is craving with desire.
I dream of you moving inside of me too,
Feeling me burn for you like a fire.

Clinging to my dreams of us together.
Dreaming of you and only you forever.

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  • EvansV
    September 25
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    awesome write

    very lovely and sweet a true heartfelt love poem nice job


  • red rose
    September 24

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    wow this poetry so beauitful and Romantic
    all the meaning attractive....

    i like this line"I dream of kissing your soft pretty lips"

    And this also"While your body keeps me warm, inside your arms"

  • izzy1804
    September 24

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    Oooh I really like this one. So much passion. Great write here.

    "Feeling me burn for you like a fire."

    Nice line Very....interesting way of putting it lol!

    "With your two gorgeous eyes locked in my sight." This line is awesome too!