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Bones of you

you exist

if only in the shadows of my mind
  and everywhere I look and smell and touch

your likeness has absorbed into my soul
  your features soft and delicate
      like melted coffee chocolates on my tongue

the walks I take in solitudes of mind
  between the sky and forests of life's walks
are filled with memories of one I loved
    her likeness forming in the earth, the clouds, the twigs


the bones of you
  will keep their hold on me

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  • Manofconstantsorrow
    September 24
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    This was great. I liked the last two lines the best out of them all. I look forward to reading more


  • GotLilt
    September 24
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    This flows so beautifully. I think you meant solitude in line 7. Thanks so much for entering