What to do when the pain
is more than I can bear?
Doesn't matter, those who hurt
selfishly don't even care
Left me in ruins, tatters, broken,
bitter, sad shell of a human being
suffer away my days, minute by minute
praying for death's release and freeing
A distant dream of heaven, so lovely,
colors so vivid, and lost loved ones surround
or a life spent in mental and physical agony
Satan's mercilessness is without bound
Still more loss heaped on, tears have fallen
weep away my days, hour by hour
seduced into total darkness of hopelessness
suicide's beckoning power
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Aww, darling, this is sad. So very sad. Suicide is not the answer. Suffering is not an option. Acceptance is one of the most hard things to come by, but one of the best things to achieve. Good luck in all you do.
Vhoori
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Very sad. You have expressed so well the feelings so many of us share.
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well done!!
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amazing
this is so good. i can tell where you are comming from big time.
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"Left me in ruins, tatters, broken,
bitter, sad shell of a human being"
Beautiful words for such a hard emotion to experience. Strange how some of the most intense dark emotions seem to bring out the best of the writing, and how sometimes, writing can take the sting out of some of the darkest emotions. Good write, most definitely.
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good i like it could really feel the pain there
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That terrible black dog that haunts us all you have captured its thoughts well the way it bears down upon us and weakens us sadly suicide hurts many people we leave behind though loved ones who blame themselves and those who love us but we dont realise so it is a terrible sad though an excellent write dear poet
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