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Over (A song)

Why can't I escape?
This is tearing me apart
It's taken a new shape
The shape of my heart

I can't survive
It's taking over
You won't revive
You said it's over

Well, goodbye then
We'll never meet again

Underneath my skin
The disease has spreaded
The edges have worn thin
My soul is shredded
This is what you've done
Congratulations, now you've won
It's all over
Goodbye, now it's over

All the lies
Are written on my grave
You ignored my cries
After all that I gave

I see what it meant to you
But be happy, now we're through
For I have fallen
To my deathbed I am crawlin

I can't believe
(I am flying now)
You would do this to me
(I am dying now)
But I see how it is
I won't be missed

Well, goodbye then
We'll never meet again

Underneath my skin
The disease has spreaded
The edges have worn thin
My soul is shredded
This is what you've done
Congratulations, now you've won
It's all over
Goodbye, now it's over

Well, goodbye then
We'll never meet again

Underneath my skin
The disease has spreaded
The edges have worn thin
My soul is shredded
This is what you've done
Congratulations, now you've won
It's all over, it's all over
Goodbye, now it's over

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  • VictorHolbrook
    September 24

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    good writing,

    but i think you should take out the 'verse 1' etc because it takes away from poetic beauty. i understand its supposed to be a song, but i think it would look better as a poem on this particular website. just a suggesstion, your the author.