branched chain like your heart --
carefully formed connections,
a loving smile,
a kiss
holding hands across the distance,
moments spent in harmony,
strong bonds,
a link never to be broken
Author notes
45 minutes, 30 words
Prompt: Polymerized (polymerize: chaining together many simple molecules to form a more complex molecule with different physical properties)
A non-entry for http://allpoetry.com/contest/2461399
A contest entry
- Just Write by Leance.
400 points, ended October 27, 35 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Quickie. by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended November 26, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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cute.
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Thank you
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a lovely expression you share here.
nicely worked.
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Thank you, much appreciated
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This is beautiful........a link of sunflowers could chain the entire world, that is if the entire world were up for peace and harmony. Nicely captured. Thanks so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Leance
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the lovely trophy! I'm glad you liked the poem
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Beautiful
I love daisychains. They're so simple yet they can mean so much.
This is so sweet. Gives me an image of a teenage romance. Or maybe a childhood sweetheart
Either way, I liked it.
Thanks for entering and best of luck
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked the poem
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what a provking write
A nice interpretation of your prompt. Simple and effective the stringing of these words.
Nice work
Good luck
Dave
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Thank you very much for the kind comment and for hosting such a fun contest
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Ahh it is so sweet. Your poem touched my heart
. I really love your poem. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for your entry. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Thank you very much
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Wow, this is a great poem. Thanks for the entry. It is great that you can fit so much into so little. And i love tht you added a picture. Good job and good luck
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Thank you for the kind comment, much appreciated
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Never to be broken. I like that! It's a lovely poem. I remember the contest. You know it's hard, it gets so late that it's hard to write. The pressure is on you, yo write it, to get sleep, it can be over-whelming. I knew you could do it. There will be a contest this will be perfect for. Thank you for writing it!
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it Sometimes I find it difficult to think outside that irritating "box", especially so late at night. But there is really only one topic I want to write about and I just need to find a way to make the prompt fit
Sappy? You bet
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