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Wishs-Acrostic

Whispers of promises still swirl throughout time and space
placed there so long ago when two hearts intertwined.
In my book she wrote, “I’ll love you forever”
words penned upon paper that became carved in my heart.
Sounds of that love still echo from a corner of my mind
as clear as the picture I still carry of her beautiful face.
How time is full of surprises yet our hearts desires remain
lost from reality by those words inked upon the pages from our youth.
Strangest thing is how that flame still flickers after so much time
whenever I  close my eyes and open the door
to that unforgetable room which holds those dreams I shared with her. 



Author notes

One can always remember their 'First Love" ,as it remains tucked away in that 'corner of the mind'
Dedicated to 'Shirley,' in my heart you will always be...

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  • Denerica
    November 13

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    It is amazing how we get over someone yet really don't at the same time, God gave us big hearts like His, so much room it seems, but wouldn't want that pain either. This was full of emotion, bittersweet, nostalgic in it's right. Beautiful. Well done. Blessings.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 29

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    Essentially beautiful...


    A romantic sublime memory depicted with poetic beauty of the colors of the rainbow of love.

    I have enjoyed the reading of words of wonders on a Scroll of love.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


    • who iam
      September 29
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      Your comments are well received and much appreciated.
      Love and life take on different meaning over time,but the memories have a way of lingering on ...forever.
      Thank you !


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 23

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    All our life's we take pieces of others with us as each experience molds and shapes us into who we are.
    just as God has meant it to be
    what a lovely precious memory you have shared
    soulful poetic perfection
    God bless you Sam....


    • who iam
      September 23
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      You are so right in that a part of everyone we encounter remains,especially those we love .

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