http://allpoetry.com/contest/by/naena
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Here is the first Villanelle I ever wrote........
Shades of Nothingness
Try as I might, I can't progress-
a captive of this cursed night-
I'm bound to shades of nothingness.
Haunted by pain I can't supress,
a wingless bird dreaming of flight-
try as I might, I can't progress.
Not worth the time or hope, I guess-
there stands no witness to my plight.
I'm bound to shades of nothingness.
Too numb to feel, I must confess.
Confusion stands to blur my sight-
Try as I might, I can't progress.
Why seek an evasive caress?
To see the sun and all it's light?
I'm bound to shades of nothingness.
No chance against these weights, that press.
Can't muster up the strength to fight.
Try as I might, I can't progress.
I'm bound to shades of nothingness.
A contest entry
- 2000+ points toward your next contest... by Jocelyn Davis.
2200 points, ended October 13, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oh, and the link in the AN didn't work. :/
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Excellent idea. Creative, and involving a classic form.
Except, you got it switched around.
Please fill out the /contest description/ in the /entry/ section, just as you plan to post it if you run the contest. your 'experience' etc. goes in the AN. 
Thanks for entering. Good luck!
