Mercy

Oh, thee Demoniac entity

To my sorrows assiduous

Thou heartless judge

Castigating, my so humain existence

Life!.. Life

My endless journey

Into the infinity of the Cosmos

A prisoner I...

Restraint angel of matter

Within each step I tread

She hurts my feet

A lover she!

I live to praise her beauty

Mercy!.. I beg

The mercyless

And my quenching spirit

The fountain

Of everlasting Light longs for

To be with.

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BonnieQ
September 28

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Jalalbad is right, the Light is the only way. Once again, your writing impresses me and I wonder if you have considered publication. You phrase as those masters of old and, despite the lack of rhyme (which I prefer), I never seem to notice it is not there: your words so beguiling, the rhythm seductive, the flow inviting. Why, oh, why do you not put your poems in contests? You really should expose more readers to your work and contests are the way. Nevertheless, this is another worthy of GOLD!

Much love and hugs, SisBon
- Angelo di Luce
  September 29
  
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  When a teacher such as you gives reviews such as this, what must the humble apprentice do, I wonder....
  Thank you kindly SisBon
Jalalbad
September 27
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ask yourself why so gloomy, in the dark. The Light is the only way Nick.
lovlilmystery
September 24

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Exquisitely beautiful, my friend. I wish, I sometimes could write like this. I feel, sometimes in my heart, I really could. Once again, you have amazed me. And have written another poem, to make one think. Man! this is totally awesome. Thanks for sharing, friend. Take care and have a great day.

Sandi
AngelBellerose
September 23

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the words are beautiful
the merciless thirst
and my quenching spirit for the
everlasting light.. stunning
Hugs Angel♥