Silver-studded darkness melts
into burning gold;
Welcoming another dawn.....
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
700 points, ended October 10, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatcha think?
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very nice perhaps a little too long for haiku but still a good entry
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Beautiful...a topic that has been beaten to death yet you gave it a slight twist. I really like it.
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This was awesome, I don't usually like haikus, but this one really stood out.
Not a lot I can say, really, i like the imagery, it made me feel happy and...something. I'm smiling now
well done
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That was brilliant. I don't think I have ever, ever read a 3-lined poem, haiku or not, that was so beautiful and powerful in its imagery. I loved this.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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wow
shorty tjhis is excellent! i swear you are one of a handful, who write Haikus that i actually like..
4 real though.. this is amazing lady, good job..
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