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Misapprehensions

Take my hand and run with me,
Forever we leave to Neverland.
We shall live in wonders,
Befriend the inevitable,
And live as we wished before.

Take my hand and stroll with me,
Together we discover new land,
And we shall live forever in harmony,
Together forever,
Just you and me.

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i know... i know, not my best. but i came up with it in like two minutes....

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 23

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    I like this; pretty good for 2 minutes

    Something tells me (and this is just me) that this poem should have another stanza to it.

    I like it, though, all of it