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Foreboding

It was nothing short of the worst feelings-
Despair and hate,
Disgust and distaste.
But that very day you stole my heart,
You ran away,
You tore it apart.
Who knew that you,
The one I trusted so much,
Would be the one I’d hate forever?
There is no trust to this now,
No truth, only lies.
Goodbye to you my dear…
Forever and ever goodbye.

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I wrote this for my creative writing class... tell me honestly what you think... please!

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