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In my life

I miss your lips thou
we've never kissed
I long for your arms
thou they've never
held me tight your
voice brings peace of
mind I thank god every
day your mine forever
I prey to  be in your
life cause you are mine

Author notes

title sucks i know but its all I could think of

just lonely and looking for someone to care

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  • The Hidden Darkness
    November 3

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    I think with a little bit of revising and corrections to the language this poem would be absolutely fantastic. Do you perhaps mean "though" when you write "thou" ?

    keep working!