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Is this it?

I found out I wasn't enough
crying daily but trying to be tough
17 and already fucked up my life
Was engaged but lost my wife
This has happened many times before
It seems every girl I love is nothing but a whore
Well I'm not gonna complain to much
I wont to feel love and a gentle touch
Raising money so I can leave
I'm guessing alone I will be
I don't want this to be true
But there isn't anything I can do

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  • Dark-Moon-Enid
    September 23

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    Powerful.

    I feel your pain, this poem is so amazing how many people can relate to it.
    This is a really powerful poem and it's just...I just can't find the words for it.