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Sun Shadows

I cover my eyes
In hopes that
You wont over come my disguise
I have shadows in my sun
That are burning me alive
Stripping away the masked layers
Pealing me back inside
Dying in front of you
A smile is plastered
Across my flaming face
The sun inside can only burn for so long
Until it becomes the moon without love

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