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Heart Movement

Hearts are falling
We’re falling up stairs
Dreams falling back into the skies
Among the stars where there is no lies

Hearts are breaking
We’re breaking up again
Promises breaking before being spoken
Like little love vows meant to be heart tokens

Hearts are shattering
We’re shattering each other
Commitment shattering at the door
A heart without a chance falling to the floor

Hearts are beating
We’re beating ourselves
Hands beating bruised faces
A pair leaving each other cold and dateless

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