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Time-Truth


Closing my eyes,
looking up at Heaven.

Loving the stars,
hating Hell.

Seeing you,
missing me.

Oh hello goodbye,
I never thought we were dreaming

Alone, with the zephyr (why such an arcane word, Bibi!)
brushing my skin.

We steer the wheel
back onto the right Highway

of Life. You give me your
ring, that mythic love.

Oh why Time-Truth,
blighting this destiny

I could never forget you,
though right now

I'm faced with that
sonorous tone

of my prima donna;
new love of mine.

 

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grit
back
frost
tone
steer
ring
dreaming
blight
alone
ere
zephyr
mythic
prima

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  • arthyria
    September 23

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    x.x i guess it's hard to collaborate when our two styles are very different. and truthfully, i can only sort of guess at the narrative. still, your poetic voice is your poetic voice =p


    • charmander13
      September 23
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      oops.

      you mean we're supposed to write one poem... i gotta continue on from where you left issit? ack! ...another wordbank!? (I forgot =C)