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Like you

God, there is something about this situation
Dreams warn me
Friends warn me
Yet I can't let go

 

-Like I should-

 

The forest is deep and seeping with life
It calls when I don't listen
Because other things like him wander it
and it's the closest i can be to him

I never asked for this
He was not intentional
And I was minding my own business
But I wouldn't trade it for anything

Delusional
I couldn't see why he begged to be left alone
But we failed miserably
And here I am

Standing over the edge
Wondering if he would feel it if I died
Wondering if he knew I was on this cliff
A junkie for cheap thrills

The sea would engulf me
Numb me
Freeze me
And possibly bring me closer to what he is

No matter what
Romeo kills Juliet,
and that truth i can live with.

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  • purplemoon
    November 5

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    Very good comparison to twilight! I LOVED IT!!

    Thanks for entering.
    ~Kathryn


  • foreheadofgod
    September 23
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    i geuss i should have noticed that it was a contest entry too tho. but i love it. and i like the contests because they push you and challenge you.

  • foreheadofgod
    September 23

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    i like it...was it inspired a little by a certain song? "delusional...failed miserably?" any way i really like your weird dark doomed romances. is the guy in this a mythical creature cuz it sounds like it. and we all know from watching cursed what happens to girls who mess around with mythical creatures.lol.


    • Twitchy Witch
      September 23

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      hmm

      i was listening to him when i wrote that part...cos she is delusional most of the saga