life
death
pain
sorrow
live for nothing
die for all
in the end
we all will fall
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
this is great!! first thought.... it's like a staircase
you could space it out as one...
like I said, just a thought....
-
short and to the point. i like this. its really true to life. great write dan.
stay strong
~destiny
-
I feel this...it's the raw, harsh truth.
-
-
reanna
runs and glomps u
kisses ur cheek
-
-
this is amazing; I can feel your pain
-
it would prolly be cool to just come up with a title that has absolutly nothing to do with it.
-
-
like what
-
-
hmmm idk really possibly something random ...im not very good with coming up with names either
-
-
-
complex words with different meanings, yet they all tie together
-
-
my goal
-
-
Hmmm..very tricky..Not really a poem but still good...Maybe..Feelings of Life? I don't know..just a guess. Keep up the good work, Dan.
~Kayla
-
-
love that title
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
