Emotions spreading from face to face
Happiness, love and sometimes hate
But on the other side of the globe
Poor people are left, stuck in a war zone
Hand in hand, side by side
We’re a team, what’s yours is mine
So big, so fun, under the sun
We’re all right here in this world as one
Paparazzi are constantly
Taking snaps of celebrities
Although, when you look at everyone
We are all the same, lotsa’ money or none
Hand in hand, side by side
We’re a team, what’s yours is mine
So big, so fun, under the sun
We’re all right here in this world as one
Nobody’s better, we’re all the same
But we’re also different in a good way
So next time you whinge and moan and cry
Just remember how lucky you are
Hand in hand, side by side
We’re a team, what’s yours is mine
So big, so fun, under the sun
We’re all right here in this world as one
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The background shocked me, the color scheme is exactly that of my AP page

Your poem is so full of innocence, that it makes one feel ashamed of all the discrimination they might have been guilty of all their lives.This is how we're all supposed to be " as one", but sadly the main essence of humanity is forgotten by many of our kind. It makes me happy to read your poem and realize that theres still hope, and that some people, like yourself, are here trying to keep that feeling of oness alive. Good job
Keep Writing


