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Through her eyes

 

 

The teenage eyes reflected,
From the mirror so complete,
Eyes young, bright and hopeful,
With a new world at her feet.

With so much life before her,
Daily new adventures sought.
Her life was young and carefree,
Wondrous life to her was brought.

Through the eyes of her twenties,
Adventure to her life did bring,
Her love she gave unto to another,
And in her eyes her heart did sing.

But soon those eyes knew heartbreak,
The mirror streaked with tears of woe,
Her love and heart was broken,
Through her eyes the pain she showed.

Her thirties eyes were much wiser,
With more care her heart she toyed,
Till she found the true love of her life,
Her tear-filled eyes were overjoyed.

The love filled eyes of a new mother,
With the fears that a new life brought,
Determined to be the best she could,
Was the reward that her eyes sought.

Through the forties and eyes of fifty,
Came the wisdom and care within,
Demanding of life and all it gave,
For her own child in life to win.

Through her weary eyes at sixty,
Showing hardships tiresome toll,
Determination glowed deep within,
She, never erring from her role.

The sad tired eyes in her seventies,
Knew the pain of life’s tragic end,
Her loss so deep set within her,
Of her lifelong mate and friend.

The wise weary eyes of her eighties,
Looking back on her life that’s gone
On all the moments she has known
And to her memories she is drawn.

But deep within her wrinkled eyes,
Still glowed with an inner cheer,
As grandchildren gathered round her,
Drawing her back to teenage years.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1
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    This is so lovely. I can certainly relate to it. Very well written, elegant and creative. Very good.


  • PurpleSky
    September 28

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    your only as old as you feel. I think this was a wonderful write hun. I love the begining and then the way you ended it. I love the story you told here. thanks for a wonderful read my friend
    huggles
    Lena


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 26

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    This is a phenomenal piece. I got the email notification on it and I think I have read it about a dozen times since then. This is so very well written and just so striking on life itself. The journey is spell binding and yet, I can step into each stanza and know it, live it; even though I've not been a mother...I feel this acutely. It's awesome to see you writing again and I would have to say you have nailed the comeback title! Love this.

  • Oh, this was beautiful! It brought me to tears...I thought myself and how well you depicted the first few decades, and again of my grandmother now in her eighties and all the joys and sorrows her eyes have found. You have done this so well, with tenderness and understanding.

    ten

  • Eel Upside Backward
    September 26
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    Reminds me of


  • Cup-a-Joe
    September 25
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    Very nice work.
    Good luck.
    Joe


  • klassy lassy
    September 24

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    Beautiful epic of life unfolding through a woman's eyes... It makes me remember my grandmother's smile. She had a lifetime of love in hers, too. I don't think I ever heard her raise her voice and that gentleness was a powerful persuasion of heart. I catch a similar mirth in this poem, too, although there are always sorrows and losses in 80 plus years of living and giving.

    Lovely remembrance and tribute through life's eyes!

    Karen


  • catz Moderators member
    September 23

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    What a wonderful, beautiful poem, Sis. I felt each phase of her life, through my own eyes I see the years fly by... The joys and tears of each year bringing forth the memories of times gone by.

    "But deep within her wrinkled eyes,
    Still glowed with an inner cheer"

    I especially love those lines and the gathering of the grandchildren. This poem hits closer to home than I'm quite ready to face yet... but it's coming.

    An excellent piece, Ann


    Dee


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    September 23

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    That is quite the journey through time, as we race towards the end. Each year, tomorrow seems so much closer the hours go so much quicker. Well thought out and paced just right as always
    Cyber Artist


  • blueyez
    September 23

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    aww Ann this made me cry. Such a wonderfully sweet write. I love the way you've written it from how her eyes see at each stage and age in life. Beautifully beautifully penned!!!! I'm bookmarking this one! Bravo dear Ann... Bravo


  • individuality gold member
    September 23

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    a good piece of poetry penned, ah such a journey, discovering all the heartaches, love's crazy game that twists us, but a good ending here, one of smiles and hope, the circle complete.

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