and when the world crumbles
I'll paint you
in shades of cerulean and onyx
just to put you back together;
and when bloated words
lose their grip
I'll teach you to fall
Author notes
Prompt::
"... before I walk away"
- Crawl by Kings of Leon
A contest entry
- you'd better learn to crawl.... by JinSays.
1006 points, ended October 20, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
Comments
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Gah!
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Congratulations on your poem being distinguished with gold.
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I like this one alot, thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, and I wish you all the best.
love,
jin -
God, you rock.
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This seems to fit the prompt well. I liked reading it.
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That was just absolutely amazing. I loved the imagery in this - "cerulean and onyx"
Best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Brilliant write. Good luck in the contest!
~Sparrow
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You taught me how to write poetry... and for that i am forever thankful.
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Whoa. Is so very little words were you able to capture so much. Just bravo!
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In those few lines you've said more than some epics can say.
I love the style and the tone of this and I really can't see anything I would say isn't impressive and brilliant.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
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