Rich like leaves
Makes me believe
In the magic they possess
I must confess
They say it all
Without a stall
And light my way
Any time of day
Like an emerald gem
Brighter than the lights of my modem
Author notes
For Cup-of-Joe's Contest!
Never really rhymed before but this was fun 
A contest entry
- Rhyme me This by Cup-a-Joe.
520 points, ended September 29, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me back my muse!
Comments
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Some of the best poems in history are short and simple. This works for me as I don't have such a good attention span anymore.
I like this one a lot Ms. Bloy.
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Well, I DO love the rhyme--the final rhyme threw me a tad, but I will say that I enjoyed the poem and the use of rhyme... keep on pennin' ...
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Rhyme is fun! You did well for a first attempt, and you keep the meter pretty well until the last line. I love green eyes, too, especially when they flash fire.
~Karen
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Nice
Eyes like that must make your hard drive spin.
Good luck.
Joe
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