Spiders and Rainbows

~ everywhere ~

spiders and rainbows
shadows from black quills
poet you touch dreams universal
limited never are thoughts
we will bask and bloom daydreams

flying forever
guided where taken willingly
soar poets, wherever imagination smiles
~ unbounded ~

smiles imagination, wherever poets soar

willingly taken where guided

forever flying

daydreams bloom and bask will we

thoughts are never limited

universal dreams touch you poet

quills black from shadows

rainbows and spiders
~ everywhere ~

Author notes

Prompt |

This time we are using ONLY the Palindrome Form -

I wasn't sure about the constraints of capitalisation and pnctuation so left it as it was.

A contest entry

Poetry Formed LII - by Bear by Arkbear. 1250 points, ended October 12, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Arkbear
October 12

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I loved most of your thoughts....some sounded a tad forced.....and then the contrast between spiders and rainbows was quite the challenge......very well done incorporating more than one thought to ponder into your Form -

This L here is a weeeee awkward in Flow..>>>....

daydreams bloom and bask will we

The Presentation is a bit weak......I believe you could have lengthened some lines for better aesthetics -

Lovely job....this is going to be a hard contest to judge....all of you have done so well,

Bear -
Carolina Moon
September 28

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Wonderfully done..I love rainbows but eek @spiders Fantastic work.. All the best to you!

Linda ;f
Night Hope
September 23

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I love palindromes. Danny showed me that one of mine was one and I've been looking at each one thoroughly ever since. Good luck in the contest, Scribe. You surely do soar.
lilangelsnemesis
September 23

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Wow...
The title drew me in because it was unique, but once inside I found more then I expected. This was beautiful forward and back with a wonderful flow. I myself, personally, like these kinds of poems without the restraint of Capitalization and Punctuation. I think it gives it a better flow without having to be stopped by a period. But, I'm not the contest runner so my opinion doesn't matter. lol!

lilangel'snemesis
crivanea
September 23

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i saw the form and was like....let's leave it for the expert love it
AlexandraHamilton
September 23
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I liked this. I read it both ways with pleasure. Good luck in the contest; this is a great write!