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Woven in Sunlight

The sun beams through me like I'm not there.
Just passes through me like I'm air.
I belong here in the sun
because he and I are mainly one.

Sharing in the development of life with my friend.
The warm glow of his light
Sending tingles all over my skin.
Also indirectly lighting the night.

Flowers grow
And animals survive.
Let your nurishing light flow.
Let life thrive!

Author notes

This is the complete opposite of how I feel. I like the moon but that is lighted by the sun.

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  • xkadiex
    October 21

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    So fair, i think its wounderful, Very sweet and passionate in a way nice to find someone who doesnt try to make their life seem like its the worst on the planet and lies through their teeth great write so far.