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Surviving A Sociopath

This is me. The me you never knew
For I forgot myself beneath your touch.
You worked me 'til I used you as a crutch.
Then when you had clipped my wings... you flew.

This is me without the masks I wore
Because you asked me to, 'cause I was weak.
You sad, manipulative, lifeless freak!
How could I have been so blind before?

This is me beyond you. I survived
Despite your lies and selfish little schemes,
And all your twisted psychopathic dreams.
With you I decayed. Without you - thrived.

This is me - survivor, real, free.
The parasite is gone. I'm only host
To my desires and dreams. I'm not a ghost...
I'm living. Loving. Satisfied. I'm.... me.

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  • Eusebius
    September 25

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    your ususal most excellent stuff here, some great lines, in fact more than just "some" great lines!!! loved it!


  • TheDeadMan
    September 24
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    very nice. great flow.i can feel emotion behind it.


  • Antebellum
    September 24

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    I really like this.


    This is me beyond you. I survived
    Despite your lies and selfish little schemes,
    And all your twisted psychopathic dreams.
    With you I decayed. Without you - thrived.


    I understand this part so well. thank you so much for entering. good luck.