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Tease.

Oh you've become so articulate.
It's funny how you think you've got me,
Hanging from your lips.
Waiting for each word to pass.

I've got a better sentence.

Fuck your lies and Fuck your tongue.
FUCK is the only thing you've ever sung.
Give up and In to your desires...Too bad your name is like menstruations tires.
Running, Burning. Tearing to shreds, Slowly Catching FIRE.
The pain is unbearable so please, next time you knock.
Atleast give me a psuedo name, like you did back then.
When your dick was some how 2 inches bigger and a little less limp.
Pour me some vodka, without the bubbles this time.
I'm hoping I can actually put in some effort, instead of being blind.
You think you got the best of me, but I'm not falling for your tricks.
In the end, this game we play only leads to sickness.

Grab your pump and lotion please, because in the end your girlfriend wont like what she finds. You lying, manipulating "Little"
                                          TEASE.

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Hehe. I thought it was funny.

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  • Zane Rose
    September 23

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    This was very great! It was funny and amusing to read. especially this line "When your dick was some how 2 inches bigger and a little less limp". I busted out laughing at that one! I really enjoyed it.
    You did wonderful!
    Keep up the great writing!
    ~ZMR~


    • Poetic Obscenity
      September 23
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      Hehe.

      Thank you. I'm ever so glad you like it. I am very happy that someone else thought it was funny..and understood it. lulz. =3 I thought maybe I was just crazy. Read below to get the real, inspiration.


  • tothegrave
    September 23

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    Very nice, very angry too. I like this one, I really do. Good to see you writing again.

    • Poetic Obscenity
      September 23
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      Thank you.

      =3 My friend was being a little paranoid because he got a gf. && He was warning me about the way I talk. "Love/Babe/Doll" && The Friendly "ily's" (even though we hadn't spoken in months..and I barely remembered him.
      So, I wouldn't get him in trouble..And I was like, I GET IT..o.o seriously..
      And it somehow, inspired this..Because after he said all that..He kept talking about being hard and shit. -rolls eyes- People, Really.

      Thank you for the comment. <3