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this rage burning inside
my hallow heart, it cries
lost on where to go
and what to do
on my feet, I'm running
and i cant turn back
these memories to fade
never seen again

I'm never to be seen again
by the love of my life
or friends
I'm turning my back
and running free
no more this life to be my cage

this world id damned
no one can save it now
things will only worsen
nothing can save us now
we'll be the death of ourselves
just u wait and watch
it all will end tonight

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 9

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    brill

    just u wait and watch
    it all will end tonight <-- i love these lines

    i really like this piece and it is a really great write
    awesome and amazing, great job!
    -penguin-