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My reflection

I fathom where we'll be
When time allows moments--
To re-assume previous endings
That held no positive farewells

To relive again, all our former embraces
When you forgot how
To put ones desires aside
And spell the word love

Assured that all our moments
Be safely kept from lusting eyes
And never add to such
Since hearts heal seldomley

When memories morph into the fleeting present
And our eyes embrace each others beauty
May we recognize past faults
That lust, nay overcomes reality


Author notes

For Laura's 'Poem Prompt'.

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 23

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    the words of love sing life
    into the pages embraced
    memories touch the presence held
    well penned hun .. just beautiful
    Hugs always Angel♥


  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    September 23

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    it is my dream to write like this. the imagery, the language...

    flawless beauty.