Ive been following your vague footprints through this eternal abyss,
while searching for a sign of existence
I thought I heard your voice in an alternate reality,
Was I just imagining it?
All the things that tormented us yesterday,
Will be thrown away as we venture to the end of this world.
Author notes
Just something random I came up with.
What did you think about this poem?
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i loved this. it was very beautiful. short and sweet and to the point! wondeful job. a true poet can come up with something as random as you did. lots of emotion brought out in such little words. good job and keep continuing to write!
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AWWW! BEAUTIFUL!
Told you yours was better!
All you have to do is write one short poem and you blow mine out of the water 
And don't worry... you can make enternal a word anytime you want to!
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except for the made up word i think this poem is great
lol
short poems are my favorite. they say alot in only a few words -
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enternal isn't a word -
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Why, no. no it isnt.
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