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Cry alone

I wanted you to know
Never did I let you go
Still today I hold you high
Every night alone I cry

My heart broke that day
When you went away
Some say to a better place
You had such a peaceful face

Still I can't breathe at all
After I got the late night call
How could you leave me here
I can't let your memory disapper

Still I cry myself to sleep at night
Huddle up and pray for daylight
I can still hear your voice
maybe that just by choice

I wanted you to know
Never did i let you go
Still today I hold you high
Every night alone i cry

...Just writing...

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  • Beautifully sad write, my dear. as always very poetic and smooth.

  • I love this I understand it too I have done this many times. an awesome poem s Searra

  • dopemeup
    September 23
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    wonderful


  • StarEyes
    September 23

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    Oh dear.... What a heart wrenching read! I can so relate to the feelings in this one. But you know, I too, will hear voices of loved ones that I have lost, and somehow it is comforting at times. I hope you are ok...

    You did a great job on this one!

    and love

    Nyetta